ok! First attempt at adding a story to this new project... I might keep this story or change it alltogether. I'm not sure yet. Best to let it sit a few days and see how I feel about it... Anyhow, no matter what, there will be more pages of art coming, and I will also start lettering the other finished page too... (right now I have two pages of finished art and two more pages of incomplete art)... What do you think of this story? Too cliche? Too dorky?